Tuesday, October 2, 2007

Redbone Guitar Boutique Ad Copy

MYTHS (Michael):


Myth: Atkins force-feeds you bacon and cheese.


This is the new Atkins – a focus on lean protein, good fats, vegetable, whole grains and yes, even fruit. You can eat this way with your family, at work, in a restaurant. Everywhere. And you can lose up to 15 pounds in the first two weeks. That’s no myth. That’s sweet sexy science.


Atkins is the only major diet that lets us set your goals, plan your meals, count your carbs and succeed – absolutely free. Visit atkins.com to get started now.
The top headline should say "Rock In the New Year at Redbone!"

Undearneath that, it should say "Did you make a New Years resolution to learn to play an instrument? T Street Music Instruction, inside Redbone Guitar Boutique, offers lessons in Guitar, Bass, Piano/Keyboard, and Drums. Our instructors teach at any level, whether you're a beginner, professional, or anywhere in between. Please contact us for more details, regarding Pricing, Scheduling a Lesson, Discounts, or any other questions."

Below that, I want to say, "Redbone Guitar Boutique also offers a wide selection of beginner instruments at a reasonable price. Whether it be picks, a strap, or just strings, we have everything you'll ever need to Rock In the New Year!"
At the bottom, if there is room, we can still keep GUITARS! GUITARS! GUITARS!

Is that still too many words? Send me a copy of what it'll look like with the words condensed. if it looks too bad, then I'll take take even MORE words out. Thanks!

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